Sunday, 28 June 2015

RAYA OS : HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI LAST PART



RECAP :

Rajat : Priya ko call karo???

Advocate : but wo Ram....

Rajat : Ram ram  ram he grabs Advocate's collar Mujhe Meri biwi Waapas Chahiye...uski Dor naa mere haath me hai is Janam To kya Agle Saath janam milne Nahi dunga....Says this he laughs loud  



PART 4

(PS : Song lyrics in pink color)




Ram Blindfolds  Priya's eyes

Priya : Hum Kaha Jaa rahe hai.???

Ram : abhi Kuch Nahi Bataunga Bus Kuch Kadam Or Hum pahuchne wale Hai...

Priya : Uff Ram Ye Ese Aankh  Band Karke Chalte Nahi bante...gir gayi to

Ram : Kaise Girogi...Main Hoo Naa Tumhe SambhaLne Ke liye Hamesha....

She Smiles Hear this Because So many sentiments behind this....

Both walks Upto The Lift Both enters and Ram press the 4th Floor...

Still Priya asking him but he remains silent....

When Lift arrives  at 4th ...Ram Takes her hand and take her out from Lift....

Priya again : Ram bahut hua and She about to remove Blindfold but Ram held her hand and leans to over her ear and whispers DO kadam Or Priya Bus...

Priya gasp 1st but she Says Only Do(2)

Ram Takes Her hand in his and says Ok

lets count

he says 1 and Both one step forward same for 2

Now Ram says Just Push Priya....

Priya : Kya Push ab main ye hatau Aankho se...

Ram : arey ek min Ram removes her blindfold....

Priya looks at him and see herself Standing in front of door Name Engraved

PRIYA SHARMA....

Priya looks at ram....Ram Slowly Says Push The Door Its Ur  New House Now....

Priya : But ram How Can i take this...

Ram put finger on her lips No More Arguments Tumne mere Liye itna Kiya hai to Main tumahare liye Ye to kar sakta tha....Hak banta hai Mera priya A lone tear appers in his eyes....

Hear this Tears brimming in Her eyes and she hugs Ram tightly....While crying she says I missed u so much Ram ab mujhe chodke kahi nahi jaane dungi....

Ram too hugs her tight and says Tum Kahogi to bhi nahi jaaunga......

"Hey Humnava mujhe apna bana le
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de


Both separate Ram says to priya open the Door and enter in Your House ki yahi rona hai.... Both laughs and Priya push the Door It opens Ram giver her enter in Look But She takes his hand in hers grab his palm in between her and says Hum Dono ka ghar hai Ram Saath me cahlenge ander....Ram smiles and Both enter in house....

"hmm.. hoon akela, zara haath badha de
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de.....

Kab se main dar dar phir raha
Musaafir dil ko panaah de
Tu awaargi ko meri aaj thehra de....
Ho sake toh thoda pyaar jataa de
Sookhi padi iss dil ki zameen ko bhiga de


Ram shows priya to full house....

in the end One Room is locked Priya try to opens but its locked....

Ram came near her and take out key from his pocket and give it to her....

She Excitedly opens the Door and when she enters she stopped in tracks to see views...

All walls covers with pic of Her and Ram from college Time

She Turns And looks at ram .....ram give her  Just Go and watch look....She come near to wall

 and caresses her hand over One Frame in which Both of them Throwing pillow on each other and Neha captured that Pic....She smiles and says to ram yaad hai ram humne Sab pillows ki cotton Pure Room me faila di thi Krishna Aunty ne Kitna gussa kiya tha hum logo pe....

Ram Smiles here this.....

Priya walks to another frame takes in hand and says....Ye yaad hai Tune Acting competition Jeeta tha....Yaad hai tu to participate hi nahi kar raha tha Lekin wo Isha.....and She stopped  and look at him Ram came near and says Or Isha Ne mujhe convince kar liya acting karne ke liye yahi bolne wali thi naa Tu.... He takes Frame and hang in place  and says Isha Ne Nahi mujhe Tune mujhe Force Kiya tha ki Main kar sakta hu aur Main jeet gaya Kyoki Mujhe Pata tha Ki Meri Priya ne Bola to Mera chance Hai....But Wo isha ne Credit liya tha Priya says with so much disappointment.....

Ohh hello Upset mat ho yar.....Isha Ki to aadat thi footage Khane uske Baad tata Bye Bye ki par Tum to har Time Thi mere Saath...he leaned down lil and kisses on her cheeks....Priya Blushes and run from there to another wall.....


Murjhaayi si shaakh pe dil ki
Phool khilte hain kyun
Baat gulon ki zikr mehak ka
Acha lagta hai kyun

Ram came with One frame In hand And Hug her from behind Now Priya in between Ram's Arms and He shows her pic Its Pic of Holi....Yaad hai Mujhe Colors aur gandgi se Kitni Nafrat thi Par Tum to tum thi Tumne Mujhe mana liya Holi khelne Ke liye...

Priya turn her face lil and Says Or Tumhe Accha Laga tha na Holi Khlena....

Un rango se tune milaaya
Jinse kabhi main mill na paaya

Dil karta hai tera shukriya
Phir se bahaare tu laa de

Dil ka soona banjar mehka de
Sukhi padi dil ki is zameen ko bhiga de

hmm.. hoon akela, zara haath badha de
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de

Bahut....ram says in low voice...Agar Tum naa mujhe force Kati to mujhe Kabhi Holi ka asli matlab samaz nahi aata Thank you For every beautiful memory of us  Priya....i ll try to make every moment memorable says this he turns priya by her shoulder and slowly come near her face and Try to kiss her but priya Blushes and Run again

Ram Smiles and Murmured Madam Sharmati bhi hai....

He Too come behind her.....


Waise toh mausam guzre hain
Zindagi mein kayi
Par ab naa jaane kyun mujhe wo
Lag rahe hain haseen

Tere aane par jaana maine
Kahin na kahin zinda hoon main
Jeene lagaa hoon main ab ye fizaayein
Chehre ko chhooti hawaayein


Priya come to balcony and she rests her hand on railing close her eyes cool breezes strikes on her face Her hairs  flowing in airs ram too come and see her  like this Like old priya Enjoying Nature.... He feels relief to see her like this back to normal He too stand there with close eyes...

Inki tarah do kadam toh badha le
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de
O.. hoon akela, zara haath badha de
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de


Priya opens her eyes and See Ram standing there Just like Her She slowly Match her level to rams without uttering single word slowly come near him face and kiss on his lips slowly and Runs again....

The Night witness their thrust of love pure love

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Rahne ka Thikana to ho gaya Ye purana Thikana kab kaam aata...

Ab Pahle priya ko sabak sikhana hai mujhe....


Rajat calls on priya's number....

Priya who is sleeping in


Ram's arm her head on Ram's one arm and his one arm over her waist......


Her phone disturbs her sleep she opens her eyes and try to move on to take her phone but bcoz on Ram's weight she is unable to move she slowly picks Ram arm from her waiste and put it on other side and she just about to getup but Ram again move his hand over her....and murmur Sleep naa priya Waise bhi tumne mujhe kal sone nahi diya.....Priya blush here this and

says....Ram mera phone baj raha hai Koi important call hua to.....


Ram opens his eyes and fill the gap between both and whispers in her ear not important than this.....

Phone stop buzzing.....

Ram give her see phone stop buzzing looks and bite on her earlobe....

Dekha ab to phone bhi band ho gaya...

Priya smiles and give him let me go look and plead to go....

But Ram in no mood he nodded in negative and start kissing her on neck....

Priya shivers and says Ram let me go naa i have to....

Ram stops in his action and getsup and seat on bed ....priya too seat and cover her with bedsheet....
Ram smiles seeing this....
But priya ask what happen Ram why suddenly u getup....

Ram hold her palm in his and says....Priya never ever say let me go...i ll never let u go....

Seeing Ram in this state tears appers in her eyes.....

She rest her head on Ram's shoulder and says Sorry Ram i dont mean its just ahhh she hasitate to tell
Ram looks at her and says is everything fine....

Ahh she says Ram i have to go to washroom let me go....
Say  this she getup cover herself properly....

Ram laughs and say Ohh common no need to hide i have seen last night....

Priya blushes and turns and say U r so naughty Ram....

Only naughty hmmm....Ram winks...

I mean romantic too....Priya replies...and runs to the washroom...

Ram laying again on bed and say Hayye mar gaya main too....

Priya in front of mirror admire herself in mirror seeing Lovebites she blush
And say Priya Ram tujhse bahut pyar karta hai Never let him go.....

Here Priya's phone again buzzed....

Ram attend Call without seeing number and say Hello.....

Ohh To Priya ka call ab uska bodyguard attend kar raha hai....

Ram's grips go tighter on phone Rajat how dare u call priya and how....ohh so u escape....

Rajat : Priya or mera abhi divorce hua nahi hai wo meri biwi hai or tu Tujhe to main dekh lunga abhi priya ko phone de nahi to....

Ram : Nahi to kya.....

Rajat : peehu or uska bhai....and he laughs

Ram : peehu ko kuch....and he stops in middle and see priya standing in front of her.....

Priya runs to ram take phone and say dekho rajat peehu ko kuch mat karna please....Tum jo bologe main wahi karungi...but please meri peehu or kush ko kuch mat karna....

Rajat : theek hai aapka hukum sar aankho par biwi ji ab bina police ko bataye Apne Aashiq Ram ko yaha le aao Old harbour ke pass Ek purana ghar hai waha....and he cut the call.....

Priya looks at Ram and hug him....

Ram console her and say Kya hua bola Rajat ne....

Priya start sobbing and while sbbing she say mujhe or tumhe bulaya hai....or bola hai ki police ko naa batau....main fir se tumhe khona nahi chahti

Ram seprate and wipes her tears....
Kuch nahi hoga maine RAW ke agent se kal baat kar li tumhara Phone tap ho raha tha....uska address Raw ko pata lag jaaega lekin Hame waha jaana padega Peehu aur kush ke liye...

Priya just nodded....

Ram calls to Raw agent and tell him that they will meet near old harbour from there he and priya ll go house And u ll cover the house from surrounds....

At the near horbour.....

Raw agent explains Ram everthing and give both bullet proof jacket to wear inside....

Both do the same....

Raw agent and his team take other rout and they hides in woods but covers house from all direction

Ram and priya enters in house

Ram calls in loud Rajat we are here now release peehu and khush please....

A phone in dark start buzzing just phone's light is visible....

Ram takes phone in hand and screen flashes " Take this call "

Ram swipe the green button

Tumhe kya laga Ram ki tum puri force leke aaoge or main waha tumhe ese hi mil jaaunga ab dekho main peehu or khush ke saath kya karta hu.....and he cut the calls.....

Ram looks at priya who is alrwady crying....

Rams phone buzzed and Raw agent(vinod lol) no flashing....

Haa vinod i was just about to call u....

Vinod : Ram wo meri ek team ke aadmi ne Rajat ko Priya ke new apartment ke pass dekha....

Ram : tumhe priya ke new apartment ke baare me kaise pata....

Vinod : Ram humne priya ke uppar ek spy(jassus) laga rakha tha....

Ram : what how dare u vinod....

Vinod : look Ram Rajat ek terriost hai Or priya uski biwi hum is baat se kaise inkaar kr de ki wo priya ko contact nahi karta jail se bhaagne ke baad..

Ram : ohh jo bhi ho Rajat ke saath 2 bacche hai uska abhi mujhe call aaya agar usne un baccho ko kuch kiya....

Vinod : kuch nahi hoga trust me....

Ram : ok...

He looks at priya who is sitting on ground her head on her laps and she is crying...

Ram runs to him and says priya please ese kamjor mat pado main hoon naa main sab theek kar dunga....
He hugs her and she hugs him back still sobbing....

Priya's apartment building.....

Ram priya and all Raw team approach there.....

Raw team stops Ram and Priya to ground floor and Agent Vinod and 5 cops takes stair case to approch 4th floor.....when they reach priya's aprtment its locked from outside....they dont understand whats going on Apartment is locked from outside that means....ohhh vinod tells
Cops to go down Ram's and priya's life in danger....

Here on ground floor
Priya panics: Ram hum uppar kyo nahi jaa rahe agar Rajat ne Un cops ko dekha to he ll kill both child....

Ram : kuch nahi hoga priya Tum shant raho...

A voice came from behind.....

Shant raho priya bahut panic karti hoo....

Bith turns and see rajat standing there with gun in his hand and pointed on Ram....

Rajat please tum jo chahte ho main vo karungi Case wapis le lungi plz  ye gun niche karo or baccho ko chod do....

Arey ese kaise Jaaneman Abhi to Ram ko vanvaas bhejne ka time aaya hai.....he shoot one bullet just near the Ram...priya shouts Ram and she come near her and check ram u ok she came in front of Ram and says to Rajat agar Ram ko maarna hai to pahle mujhe maarna hoga....

Ram shocked hear this he says priya tum pagal ho gayi ho kya hato saamne se....

Rajat : Ohh itna pyar......maine bhi tumse kiya tha priya par badle me tumne mujhe kya diya jail dhokha ....Chalo  Sab bhul jaate hai .....Nayi shurwat karte hai Aao yaha Mere saath chalo to main Ram ko chod dunga.....

Priya looks at Ram
Ram nodded in negative.....
Priya then looks at Rajat and says : or bacche.....

Rajat : wo uppar apartment me so rahe hai.....
Chalo jaldi aao yaha or hum chale Ye desh chodke jaha hum dono ke bich koi naa aa paaye...aao he extends his hand for priya....

Ram holds priyas hand and says nahi priya kuch nahi hoga mujhe tum iski baat me mat aao....

Priya with teary eyes looks at Rajat  then again Ram and says Mujhe jaana hi hoga Peehu aur Khush ka khayal rakhna....

Ram too with teary eyes Mat jaao priya......

Rajat extends one hand to priya Priya slowly slowly takes steps towards Rajat...he caught her hand and pull her and point Gun on her head...
Meantime cops arrives there....they point gun on Rajat.....

Rajat : apne weapons ground par
Rakh do jaldi warna he pointed on gun
Puri ki puri 6 khaali kar dunga.....

Ram : please vinod do as he says....

All cops put their weapons down.....

Rajat : Ab stair case ke pass jo key Padi hai usse us channel gate ka lock kholo and dusri tarf jaao lock laga ke key bahar feko jaldi....

Cops and Ram starts to move as he says....but Rajat stops Ram and says Tum nahi Ram...tum sab(cops and agent)

Now cops are anotherside of gates and its locked.....

Priya : Rajat ab Ram ko jaane do jaisa tumne bola waisa kiya please ab....

Rajat : itni jaldi nahi Abhi to kuch hisaab barabar kiya jaaye...and he shoot on bullet on Ram it hit his right shoulder and he falls on ground.....

Priya try to run but Rajat held her hand tight.....Priya hit Rajat on his chest and shoulder .....u liar Ram ko...
Start sobbing tumne jhut kaha....

Here Ram on ground ...

Rajat push priya hard she falls on ground too....

Rajat come near Ram....ram on his chest side and his back towards Rajat...

Rajat : itni jaldi nahi Ram....idhar muh karo aur apni mout dekho.....Dekho kaise Tumhari Aur Priya ki kahani Adhuri Rahegi Fir se.....

Ram slowly turns and says in low Voice....which is not hearable to Rajat....

Rajat : kya kya kya Ram...kuch sunai nahi diya....chalo main tumahre liye thoda niche aa jaata hu aakhir marne wale ki aakhiri Ikchha puri hona chahiye.....he just benned down but Suddenly Ram give a kick on his hand and Rajat disbalance and fall on ground and  gun falls on ground too which is far from him....

Ram getsup but Rajat caught his legs...Ram slips but he manage to stand Rajat too stand up....

Ram pushes Rajat and he give two three Solid punch on Rajat's face....
Bleeding start from his mouth....

Rajat too replied Ram with his punch....

Rajat : too Ram aaj to tumahri Ramayan main khatam karke hi rahunga....give Ram 2-3 more punch

Ram fight back and says : Ramayan me Ant(end) hamesha Ravan ki hoti hai Ram ki nahi....

Rajat : lekin is Ramayan me Ram ki hogi....
Ram gives him a solid punch he falls near weapon of cops....he grabs one Gun and standup point on Ram and says.....

Kaha tha is Ramayan me Ram marega......

And building echo by sound of gun shots..one after another 4 rounds of gun shots....

Then He with wipe open mouth looks at priya.......Tears start flowing from her eyes......

Gun falls from her hand and hit the ground......

Rajat with gun in hand collapse on ground......
His mouth still open as he still in shock that 4 rounds of gun shot on his stomach by none other than Priya.....

Priya falls on her knees and Ram runs to her take her in his arms.....

Priya hugs him as tight as possible...ram pats on her back console her....she dugs her head deep inside in his chest....and cry aloud.....

Vikram and Neha apporach there....
Vikram goes and open the gate lock for cops

Vinod tells vikram How Ram kick rajat's hand and his gun falls near priya....and in between Ram and Rajat's fighting priya grab the gun and when Rajat about to shoit Ram....priya shooted Rajat with 4 bullets in a row....
Vikram and neha hugs Ram and priya....

all cops stand in line attention situation

Ram priya and Vik neha looks them...

And all salutes to priya for her bravery......

Vik-neh Ram and priya approach her apartment and opens the door.....

Pihu and kush runs to priya and hugs her....

Priya caresses both face and ask u ok naa....

Both nodded and ask by guesture who is he(Ram)....

Ram benned down to ground and spread his hands abd says.....sirf mumma se miloge.....Papa se nahi....

Both looks at priya and priya nodded in yes.....

Both run to ram and jump on him Ram kisses both on their cheeks....

Ram takes pihu in left shoulder and khush in right and getup both started blabbring....

Priya's eyes fills with tear to see the view....

Ram give him " why are u crying "
She runs and hugs him....

Vikram to neha  : Maine tumhe kaha tha naa Ram aur priya ki kahani Kabhi adhuri nahi Rah sakti....

Ram priya ke liye bana hai
Aur Priya sirf aur Sirf Ram ke liye.....

The End.....

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

When it comes to your writes up there is always shortage of words well it is one of most heart touching RaYa story... I know every story has an ending but my heart still wishes that there should be no end of this one... thank you for this beautiful RaYa journey

Unknown said...

Its awesome part
Pls merit favourite story ka bhi update dede

Unknown said...

awesome update

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