Saturday, 27 June 2015

RAYA OS : AA TUJHME BITAAU RATIYAAN



Here Is small attempt Positive and Negative all comments welcome 
Song Line in Pink color


"Its  heart wrenching  for anyone to loose their One ...Dear One whom he/she loves like crazy with him/her there is no bondation of limits You love them and they love You.....But when destiny plays their game u cant do anything  There Is only your love who gives u the strength to fight for them 


Here Is Ram fighting with destiny from last 7 years....With a Hope that One day priya will wake up and hugs him and tell him "Kitne mote ho gaye hai " Bus ek baar pyaar se bolte uth jaao Priya bahut hua....but surround  circumstances specially their symbol of love pihu pushes him to marry Juhi.... He never wants this But because of Naina Sake he agrees to marry and Now Today is D-day He ll pull out plug of Life support System from Priya's emotionless Body This is his last night with priya He wants to take all her pain......He take permission from doctor to take her home with all machines....

With all procedure and all family drama Ram and Priya in their  Green.....Room
As per ram instruction Nurse wear Priya Ram's White Kurta which was neatly clean except a lipstick mark on near Shoulder ....ram sat near Priya's lifeless body  caresses her 
 forehead.....then he takes her both hand in his Kiss on her hands....tears start brimming in his eyes he about say something he  choked  and wipes his tears and says Aaj nahi rounga priya bilkul nahi Aaj bus Pyar karunga...opps He bites his tongue mean Pyar ki baate karuga....he looks again her and again tear is not brimming it started flowing from his eyes to cheeks.....He puts her hand back to bed and says Ab to uth jaao priya ab kyo nahi kahti ki ye kaisi behki behki si baate kar raho.....Again he wipes his tear with hand sand says Chalo kuch or baate Karte hai.....jaisa ki maine kaha aaj sirf pyar ki baate karenge......he leaned and kiss on her forhead.....
He stand-up and goes near window hand in pocket and he looks outside and stared telling from beginning,6 wishes then...how he started feeling for her  Bg song playing 

Maine khud ko de diya hai tujhko
Main tera.. hoon tera
Kaate na kate, leta hai ye karvate
Din mera.. din mera
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Ho tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa
Ho... aa...

He turns and smiles scratches his temple and says Tum Bor to nahi ho rahi naa priya.....Then he notices something that Priya's hand on that place where he placed before he quickly runs to her....checks her and machines Nothing wrong so is that his imagination or priya's hand really moved He banned down to her chest level try to her heartbeat but bcoz of machine he unable to reach exact so....

He slowly put his hand on her heart And 1st he cant believe
her heart is beating on that level that he can feels her heartbeat he looks at her and puts his hand on mouth this is utterly shock for him which turns in Happiness....tears again makes their ways from eyes to cheeks then ground

"Tune chhuaa.. toh main dhadakne laga
Dil ki duaa.. hothon pe rakhne laga"
Tune chhuaa.. toh main dhadakne laga
Dil ki duaa.. hothon pe rakhne laga



Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa



then he looks that Her fingers is moving He quickly goes near her face and calls Priya
priya
 he is so close to her face then he saw a lone tear escape from her eyes...she slowly opens her
eyes....Ram looks at her wit teary eyes....then he understands priya is trying to struggling with oxygen mask What to do remove mask or not He with shivery hands removes mask from her mouth....She takes a long breath and try to say ....Ram still cant believe his vision blurry bcoz of tears flood in his eyes.....Priya slowly move her lips and with so much difficulty she says
R-A-M......
Ram moves his face to near her face Now Both hugging each other by faces only  
ram cries and cries out loud Took out all his pain....while crying he kisses on her cheeks
in his sobbing he says Priya....Priya u back meri priya .......i love......You
He quickly move back and tell her kaisa lag raha haii...i mean Main ye kya puch raha hu Kaisa lag raha hoga main bhi duffer hi hu U stay dont close ur eyes priya main doctor ko bulata hu....
He turns and about to move
But Priya held his hand....He stops in his tracks

Meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Ye meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Aa...


Meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Ye meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Aa...


He feels the touch still same Still warm Still make butterflies in his stomach....
he smiles and banned down to her level....She is trying to say something
he goes near her mouth....she whispers in his ears....."Kitne Mote ho gaye hai aap"



He laughs she smiles tooo......
After some time Doctor come and checks her...remove all machines from her body Its a miracle for doctor too....
Doctor : Priya will be fighting fight in some days....

ram winks at priya when doc use Fighting fit word....Priya blushes too....
All family member meet her one by One...

after half and hour....

Ram comes near her sits beside her on bed She is laying on bed Try to sit but ram gesture her its ok
u lay down no need to sit...
Priya hold his hand and says: Saat saal Mera Intjaar Mr.kapoor
Ram give her looks.....she changes word RAM.....Saat saal mera intjaar Kiya.....Itna pyar karte hai mujhse.....

Now Ram too lays down on bed he spread his one hand on priya's side she lift her head and put on Ram's arm....Ram kisses On her forehead .... Saat Saal to kya Main tumhare Liye
saat Janam tak itjaar kar sakta hu.....

Itna Pyaar Karte hai....Priya says slowly

Koi Shaq Ram winks.....

Koi ladki To pasand nahi aayi itne saalo me she asks

Nahi...ram replies....

kyu...priya ask...

Kyoki Ram sings


Maine khud ko de diya hai tujhko
Main tera.. hoon tera
Kaate na kate, leta hai ye karvate
Din mera.. din mera
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Ho tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa
Ho... aa...

She hugs him and he hugs her back both sleep in each other Arm.....

Happy Bday Aftab
God Bless You 










3 comments:

Unknown said...

Lovely os aman...as always short of words to describe this fab write up..way u exhibited emotions are par excellence ..i love write up relevant to the show..so this was really a treat for me 👏👏👏👏👏

Anonymous said...

Thank u so much Bro :)
Awesome OS *claps*
I have no words Bro :)
Very well written , Unexpected surprise too :D

Unknown said...

Super duper os aman
Happy birthday aftab

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