Here Is small attempt Positive and Negative all comments welcome
Song Line in Pink color
"Its heart wrenching for anyone to loose their One ...Dear One whom
he/she loves like crazy with him/her there is no bondation of limits You love
them and they love You.....But when destiny plays their game u cant do anything
There Is only your love who gives u the
strength to fight for them
Here Is Ram fighting with destiny from last 7 years....With
a Hope that One day priya will wake up and hugs him and tell him "Kitne mote ho gaye hai " Bus ek baar pyaar se bolte uth jaao Priya bahut hua....but
surround circumstances specially their
symbol of love pihu pushes him to marry Juhi.... He never wants this But
because of Naina Sake he agrees to marry and Now Today is D-day He ll pull out
plug of Life support System from Priya's emotionless Body This is his last
night with priya He wants to take all her pain......He take permission from
doctor to take her home with all machines....
With all procedure and all family drama Ram and Priya in
their Green.....Room
As per ram instruction Nurse wear Priya Ram's White Kurta
which was neatly clean except a lipstick mark on near Shoulder ....ram sat near
Priya's lifeless body caresses her
forehead.....then he takes her both hand in
his Kiss on her hands....tears start brimming in his eyes he about say something
he choked and wipes his tears and says Aaj nahi rounga
priya bilkul nahi Aaj bus Pyar karunga...opps He bites his tongue mean Pyar ki
baate karuga....he looks again her and again tear is not brimming it started
flowing from his eyes to cheeks.....He puts her hand back to bed and says Ab to
uth jaao priya ab kyo nahi kahti ki ye kaisi behki behki si baate kar
raho.....Again he wipes his tear with hand sand says Chalo kuch or baate Karte
hai.....jaisa ki maine kaha aaj sirf pyar ki baate karenge......he leaned and
kiss on her forhead.....
He stand-up and goes near window hand in pocket and he looks
outside and stared telling from beginning,6 wishes then...how he started feeling for
her Bg song playing
Maine khud ko de diya hai tujhko
Main tera.. hoon tera
Kaate na kate, leta hai ye karvate
Din mera.. din mera
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Ho tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa
Ho... aa...
He turns
and smiles scratches his temple and says Tum Bor to nahi ho rahi naa
priya.....Then he notices something that Priya's hand on that place where he
placed before he quickly runs to her....checks her and machines Nothing wrong
so is that his imagination or priya's hand really moved He banned down to her
chest level try to her heartbeat but bcoz of machine he unable to reach exact
so....
He slowly put his hand on her heart And 1st he cant believe
her heart
is beating on that level that he can feels her heartbeat he looks at her and
puts his hand on mouth this is utterly shock for him which turns in
Happiness....tears again makes their ways from eyes to cheeks then ground
"Tune chhuaa.. toh main dhadakne laga
Dil ki duaa.. hothon pe rakhne laga"
Tune chhuaa.. toh main dhadakne laga
Dil ki duaa.. hothon pe rakhne laga
"Tune chhuaa.. toh main dhadakne laga
Dil ki duaa.. hothon pe rakhne laga"
Tune chhuaa.. toh main dhadakne laga
Dil ki duaa.. hothon pe rakhne laga
Aa tujhme
bitaaun ratiyaan
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa
then he
looks that Her fingers is moving He quickly goes near her face and calls Priya
priya
he is so close to her face then he saw a lone
tear escape from her eyes...she slowly opens her
eyes....Ram
looks at her wit teary eyes....then he understands priya is trying to
struggling with oxygen mask What to do remove mask or not He with shivery hands
removes mask from her mouth....She takes a long breath and try to say ....Ram
still cant believe his vision blurry bcoz of tears flood in his eyes.....Priya
slowly move her lips and with so much difficulty she says
R-A-M......
Ram moves
his face to near her face Now Both hugging each other by faces only
ram cries
and cries out loud Took out all his pain....while crying he kisses on her
cheeks
in his
sobbing he says Priya....Priya u back meri priya .......i love......You
He
quickly move back and tell her kaisa lag raha haii...i mean Main ye kya puch
raha hu Kaisa lag raha hoga main bhi duffer hi hu U stay dont close ur eyes
priya main doctor ko bulata hu....
He turns
and about to move
But Priya
held his hand....He stops in his tracks
Meri
raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Ye meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Aa...
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Ye meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Aa...
Meri
raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Ye meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Aa...
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Ye meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke
Aa...
He feels
the touch still same Still warm Still make butterflies in his stomach....
he smiles
and banned down to her level....She is trying to say something
he goes
near her mouth....she whispers in his ears....."Kitne Mote ho gaye hai aap"
He laughs
she smiles tooo......
After
some time Doctor come and checks her...remove all machines from her body Its a miracle
for doctor too....
Doctor :
Priya will be fighting fight in some days....
ram winks
at priya when doc use Fighting fit word....Priya blushes too....
All
family member meet her one by One...
after
half and hour....
Ram comes
near her sits beside her on bed She is laying on bed Try to sit but ram gesture
her its ok
u lay
down no need to sit...
Priya
hold his hand and says: Saat saal Mera Intjaar Mr.kapoor
Ram give
her looks.....she changes word RAM.....Saat saal mera intjaar Kiya.....Itna
pyar karte hai mujhse.....
Now Ram too
lays down on bed he spread his one hand on priya's side she lift her head and
put on Ram's arm....Ram kisses On her forehead .... Saat Saal to kya Main
tumhare Liye
saat Janam
tak itjaar kar sakta hu.....
Itna
Pyaar Karte hai....Priya says slowly
Koi Shaq
Ram winks.....
Koi ladki
To pasand nahi aayi itne saalo me she asks
Nahi...ram
replies....
kyu...priya
ask...
Kyoki Ram
sings
Maine
khud ko de diya hai tujhko
Main tera.. hoon tera
Kaate na kate, leta hai ye karvate
Din mera.. din mera
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Ho tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa
Ho... aa...
Main tera.. hoon tera
Kaate na kate, leta hai ye karvate
Din mera.. din mera
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Ho tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa
Ho... aa...
She hugs
him and he hugs her back both sleep in each other Arm.....
Happy Bday Aftab
God Bless You
3 comments:
Lovely os aman...as always short of words to describe this fab write up..way u exhibited emotions are par excellence ..i love write up relevant to the show..so this was really a treat for me 👏👏👏👏👏
Thank u so much Bro :)
Awesome OS *claps*
I have no words Bro :)
Very well written , Unexpected surprise too :D
Super duper os aman
Happy birthday aftab
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