Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Two Shots : Main Rahoon Ya Na Rahoon Part 1

Hello ppl After So many days i am writing something Actually i have written this long back but No time For posting i have dedicate this Os to That person Who actually Nagged me to listen this song So here is 1st Part of this Two Shots  

Character taken from obviously Serial Bade Acche  Lagte Hai Ram and Priya 

Song : Arman malik "Main Rahoon Ya Naa Rahoon "

Sorry for Grammatical Errors and spelling mistakes  

Part 1 


She is sitting on arm chair in balcony eyes closed Ginger tea in hand She wore Saree after months with her favorite open back blouse covered only with dories which she bought to tease her husband who hated this blouse because he thinks its waste so much time to open those  Dories   

its been so many days she came here to take time for herself She don't have time now a days his husband is sleeping now So She took some time from her busy life

Her day Start with ram and Ends with Him....yes Ram her husband her love of life.....She loves everything About Him...His hazel Eyes...his perfect cheek bones His everything Its not matter to her that her Ram ...well you read yourself who is Ram

Flashback

9 month Ago

 Where the hell were you...i am waiting from last 2 hour priya shout on Ram...

"i was busy in work and i ddnt make this plan i have so many work priya can u understand this simple thing " he shout back



Tears brimming in her eyes

"Now What Cry ohh god you girls Now stop crying and tell me why you want to meet me i told you i ll busy for someday dont disturb me"



She wipes her tears,bites her lower lip and scarily walks to him Kisses him his cheeks and whispers Happy birthday Ram" and runs away



He takes a sigh of relief when she disappear from his sight he collapse on floor  his hands automatically goes to his cheeks where she kissed  Wish he could Kiss her tears away..but he can't he have to live with it he have to turns her love in hatred....

they are in relationship from Last 10 years and 2 days ago he decided that today he ll ask her for marriage untill today's morning he received Call from His Doctor and his world shattered just like his dreams which he wanted to fullfill with priya he have Money power everything But he dont have future yes His Life took a  U-turn ..His doctor said to him that he is suffering from "Benjamin Button" (A disease where your body take a reverse and soon you ll act like A five year old child) when suddenly his visions back to the childhood memories Now when he knows What is getting back him to his childhood how can he think about his Adulthood ....

he sat in car tune the radio turns his car towards the Beach one hand on Staring wheel one is wiping tears time by time flowing when he listen the song playing on Radio

Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujhme kahi baaqi rehna
Mujhe neend aaye jo akhiri
Tum khaabo mein aate rehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna

Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujhmein Kahi baaki rehna



Flashback End

Her chain of thoughts breaks when Suddenly the rain Starts

She jumps from her chair to run inside but her Saree pallu stuck in chair She stands on her place Suddenly her thoughts back to the lyrics of her and her husband's favorite  song



Kisi roz baarish jo aaye
Samaj lena boondo mein main hu



Suddenly Sun rays comes from behind the Clouds its so strong she covers her face from her hands this also takes her thoughts to that Song 


Subah dhoop tumko sataaye
Samaj lena kirno mein main hu

She uncover her face spread her arms and hums Song with the Combination of rain and Sun rays which makes Rainbow in the Sky

Kisi roz baarish jo aaye
Samaj lena boondo mein main hu
Subah dhoop tumko sataaye
Samaj lena kirno mein main hu
Kuch kahun ya na kahun
Tum mujhko sadaa sunte rehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna



" Pliya "A loud voice from inside the house stops her enjoyment She runs inside hurriedly.....

She sees her husband Ram is feeling cold and he try to Snugs inside the blanket She smiles see this She goes near the bed takes the blanket and covers him upto neck He opens his eyes a smiles appears on his face

" Wheal all you (Where are you ) he says in stammers tone

Nothing here with you She replies and ruffles his hair

He takes her hand below his head and rest his head on her hand...She sit on floor near the bed He closes his eyes again

She ruffles his hair he stirs and goes to deep sleep in seconds "Adulthood habit" she again back to flashback



Flashback



I ......I dont want this relationship anymore.....Ram said fighting with his tears

"neither i do " priya replied with Confident and slowly added "Rajat came yesterday with Marriage Proposal and i have accepted we will married in one month"

Rooted on his spot He looks at her with shocked Face unable to find his own voice he mumbled " you....you accepted "

"what i have suppose to do wait for you...you who dont even know the meaning of love Ram"

Composing himself from Shock He walks to her turns her by shoulder "i am very happy for you Now i ll happily move on that you are also moving in life"

She nods at him He turns his side and disappears in the crowed



A cool wind strikes on her face brings her back to present

She looks at curtains flowing in air she walks to the window when She Hears that husky voice from past



Hawaon mein lipta huva main
Guzar jaoonga tumko choo ke
Agar mann ho to rok lena
Thehar jaoonga in labo pe

Hawaon mein lipta huva main
Guzar jaoonga tumko choo ke
Agar mann ho to rok lena
Thehar jaoonga in labo pe
Main dikhoon ya na dikhoon
Tum mujhko mehsoos karna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna



She again goes back to Her lil blissful time of  the past

"Her Wedding "




7 comments:

Unknown said...

Very nice concept and different also. I was wondering when I will able to read this type of story on RaYa.

Unknown said...

Very nice concept and different also. I was wondering when I will able to read this type of story on RaYa.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful start ❤ new and different concept... The story seems to be heart touching.... Hope you will complete this one too! and the song superb ...

Anonymous said...

Very nice start
Do complete this story
No shop wala bahana
I know u r always free
Waiting for next part ��

Dhristi said...

Loved it n good concept pls keep writing

Dhristi said...

Loved it very nice n new concept keep writing like this more

Unknown said...

Very nice
Pls continue soon

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