Tuesday, 7 April 2015

RAYA OS/TS : Tumhi Dekho Naa....Ye Kya Ho Gaya Part 1





Hello Friends After ages i m going to update TS (Two/Three Shots)and i promise You ll update soon all my stories
So about this Story this is very different From Show and others story but with the same RAYA assense Hope you all enjoy....Avoid grammmer error and Spell mistakes 

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Here is 1st part

She was sitting on staircase of old abandoned house in front of park....

In the season of Summers leaves of tree falling on ground....watching them falling from trees...she go back down to memories with Him....
Yes a blissful past...or isnt blissful who cares now He is not with him...is he move on....or is he still stuck with same railway station..again who cares priya move on....how can u think about him...He was married....no he is married....Happy or not who cares....U cares a voice came ....i saw here and there no one but a same figure like lady her vision is blurred Who is she...ohh i gasped she is just similar to me...no no she is mirror image of me...no who are you i asked....
I m ur soul priya.....

Wh...what i stanmered...i m not dead m i ???...
No you r not...i m come here to help you...to realize you...He was married..still i dont know whats his relationship just like you...who is married or divorced.....

I m divorced...i said firmly...
Do you have proof...she asked...

I look at her....No...but there is no Hope in that relationship...aur kabhi thi bhi nahi i married to Rajath just bcoz  uske father chahte the ki hum dono ki shadi ho
(his father wanted to marry both of us)

But u loved Ram....she said looking into my eyes....

It was just flacutaion...not love...

Kisse jhut bol rahi ho priya i know everything inside of you...dont you forget i m your soul....

Tears flowing from my eyes....yes i love him I love Ram...i admitted usne mujhe pyar ka matlab sikhaya....Pyar ka ehsaas usne jagaya warna i was a body without emitions....but.....

But...he was married and you you run from india and come here to London sitting on staircase bus roj ki tarah jindgi kaat rahi ho use yaad karke ro rahi ho.....aur wo she stopped....

Aur wo apni life me khush hoga main uski jindgi barbaad nahi karna chahti...i said while wiping my tears...i stood up take my bag about to walk...

Wo bhi us relationship pe khush nahi tha...in fact tumahri tarah wo bhi aage nahi bada tha........she said to me...and disappeared....

I started walking towards my home...i have money and property which my father left for me in london i got to know about this later when Rajath's father Hiten Kapur give it to me as a surprise gift as my own property He gave me as a surprise If i know about this property i never lived in Kapur house.....When my parents met in accident in India...i have no one in my life except kapur uncle...He is my father's best friend i always consider him as a father figure So after my parents Death uncle suggest me to moved with him in his house so i moved in Kapur uncle' house.....

Rajat kapur was his only son...Cheery Playful and yes my best friend I can say with his support only i came out of dipressing atmosphere...i missed so much my parents but when ever i upset or sad rajath there for me for to cheer up my mood but.....

But One day uncle came to me and said

Flahback....that day

A knock on my Room's Door

May i come in beta....

Come in uncle u no need to take permission....

Hiten : beta i need to talk to you which is very important...if u free...

Priya : yes uncle....

Hiten : beta 2 saal ho gaye hai sudhir or shipra ko gaye....

Priya just nodded....

Hiten : beta main chahta hu ki ab tum life me aage bado....shadi kar lo....

Priya just look at him and again looks in down....tears appers in her eyes....uncle main but she has no word to say....

Hiten stood up and put her hands on her head beta agar sudheer hota to wo bhi yahi chahta ki us accident ki wajah se life naa ruke tum apni jindgi me aage bado....

Priya looks at him again he wipes her tears....
Ok uncle....

Hiten smiled and said Aur aage bado Rajat ke sath....

This was shick for her...she about to say but uncle cut off her...Beta Sudheer aur main hum dono chahte the ki Rajat aur tumahri shadi hoo...wo tumse baat karne hi wala tha ki accident ho gaya...Aur uske baad main nahi chahta tha ki tumpe koi rishta thoda jaaye...agar tum rajat ko pasand karti ho to....he said looking at her....

Uncle rajat se ek baar baat kar lete...

Hiten : beta wo to bus tumahri Haa ke intjaar main baitha hai....bahut pyar karta hai tumse

Another shock for priya....

She said yes to uncle...and the preparation going on in full swing...In 7 days Rajat and Priya got married....
Rajat was so happy but Priya said yes bcoz of uncle's sake....

That Night
Their 1st night....

Rajat enter in Room and bolted door Priya sitting in Room with head down
Rajat went near her and tilt her chin...priya taken back with this but she made herself ready for this....

As rajat proceed slowly slowly he understands that priya is not responding with him...after so many try he finally said Priya what is this if u r not ready then its not necesary...

Priya look at him and said yes Rajat i m not ready actuly i said yes for all
( she narrated what uncle said to her also she never look him like that)...
Rajat stood up from bed went near drawer and take a file come back to hwr and said Priya this is gift from Papa he wants to give u at the time of marriage actuly its Sudheer uncle's wish to give u this gift when u got married....

That was the paper of Posh house located in London on priya's name...She couldnt believe on that She had a Posh house in london also a lumsum money in her account....and all this year she thought that Uncle hiten beaing her....

Her chain of thoughts broke by Rajat's voice...Priya u take ur time i ll wait for you....

She noded and take her side on bed and slept...

Rajat too come to vacant side and slept in hope one day She ll accept him.....

Priya joined a collage now she knows that she Had a huge amount in her bank account but still she travel bye only Local train.....

One day....

At local station...

Sab aurte ek jaisi hoti hai mujhe hi dekh loo...phas gaya main too aaj 1.5 saal ho gaye lekin meri biwi mujhe kuch samazti nahi hai...

Lekin Ram agar tu local train se travel kar raha hai to mujhe kyu saath me  ghis raha hai tu jaane or teri biwi aayesha Jaane Vikram complained him....

Dekh vik ye sab teri or teri pagal biwi ki wajah se hua Naa maine us pagal ladki se shadi kar li...

Bhai wo hum log aapki posh car se bhi to chal sakte the....

Car wow wo car uski hai meri nahi...Main ek Graphics designer hoo meri ek limit hai mujhe ghar chalana padta hai...wo ayesha ke lakho kharche hai i cant afford Car but wo samzti hai ki mere Train se travel karne se uski izzat kam hogi....yahi nahi mera ye karne se uski izzat kam hogi mera wo karne se uski izzat kam hogi Ram said to vik in irritated tone...

Priya listen all the converstion of Ram and vikram...

Train stopped at station

Three of them come out from station priya glances at once at Ram and left....

Eveng same station....

Ram and vikram waiting for train...

Priya coming no almost running on platform she was lil late today...she came and sit on same bench with Ram and vik she breathed heaviky bcoz of running Ram gave her water...take this she take bottle and gulp in one go...

Aaram se train aaj late...ram said she smile and said thnx and returned his bottle...

Priya reconize him and think ohh ye to wahi subah wala aadmi hai jiski...

Tring tring...her phone buzzed Its rajat...she swipe green button on screen...

Haa pahuch gayi hoon...haa Train aaj late hai....pata hai tumhe fikar hai par main bacchi nahi hu jo ye bar bar tum mujhe ye kahte rahte ho....ok i m sorry No...haa shayd ok theek hai byee....No i dont no....byee

Ram listen her one side convo....

Priya saw Shruti coming from right side she stood and greet her both sit on near by bench which is lil distance away from Ram's bench....

Shruti : Kya hua upset kyu hai...

Priya : wahi possesiveness yar...Rajat aur usi possesiveness...i married to him bcoz of uncle....i tried shruti i tried my hard to accept him but...kya karu wo feeling aati hi nahi uske liye....aaj 1.5 saal ho gye shadi ko still idont feel anything for him....

Shruti : To alag kyu nahi ho jaati....

Priya : uncle ke vajah se ab tak rajat ke saath hu...warna...you know yaar uncle is my weakness...unhe chod ke nahi jaa sakti....

Shruti : than Rajat ko bol de naa...

Priya : kitni baar bolu....

Shurti : chal train aa gayi......train arrived and both enter in train...

Ram Ram kaha kho gaya chal train aa gayi hai....vikram shook him

Haa haa Ram came to reality....

Ram and Vikram both seated in train just opposite to Shruti and Priya....

Priya watches Ram and Ram watches Priya....both in thier own world....

Priya with herself : kitni ajeeb baat hai Do alag alag insaan par Jindgi ek jaisi...Aaj....

Aaj dusri baar mil raha hu is Ladki se par jaane kyu apni si lag rahi hai...ye bhi apne jeevansathi se pareshan hai meri tarah...Ram said to himself....

Jeevansathi....jeevan bhar saath nibhane wala....Har sukh dukh ka saathi...Par mere case me bus sukh Rajat ke...dukh mere....priya thinks....

Dukh kya hote hai Koi mujhse aacha nahi jaan sakta...Ayesha se shadi karna shayad meri jindgi ki sabse badi galti thi...Par kya karta Maa Bhi ayesha ko pasand karti thi meri bhi aachi dosti thi...Par sab badal gaya shadi ke baad uski possesiveness uski reputation ohh God Life me aage badna...to dur wo to....

Train stopped both came to reality....

Priya and shruti has arrived their stop...but Priya...Priya just lost in Ram..She dont want to go but endly Shruti dragged her...

Ram so want to stop her talk to her he met a person like him...but His stop is next from this stop...sudden an idea hit in his mind....
Vikram yaha koi accha Resturant hai naa...Before vikram replied Ram held his hand and draaged him out of train....



















3 comments:

Unknown said...

Awesome start
Continue soon

Unknown said...

awesome start
pls continue soon

Anonymous said...

Beautifull concept,,,,,update soon pls :)

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